The story isn't that bad, other than some loopholes (why didn't feiyu tell moli of his space? He should have come clean right? Also he could have used the spring water to help moli advance too). Personally I quite liked the story. It has no bloody drama and quite relaxing to read.

感謝留言區，這篇能跳過了，要寫賭石文就不要寫錯核心(翡翠的分級)啦，除非自己有自創分級www

種水都沒有好好做調查….玻璃種還比冰種高一階… 除了種水還有色，竟然都沒有說到… 前幾章就遇到玻璃種還有點嫌棄、後面遇到花青跟糯種怎麼反爾很開心？？ 看到20就棄了QaQ

還滿好看的！（^_^）

只有我覺得背景很困惑嗎？有A級傭兵團、B304教室、體能訓練室、工作室，但又有古代的皇室、殿下、國公爺、馬車、城鎮那些設定…..？？？？？

攻也太不討喜，撤了

玻璃種其實算頂級了

我也是喜歡設定，但角色真的不太討喜...好多人物都讓人不喜歡，劇情拖拖拉拉，看一半棄了

背景喜歡但人物描寫太差，看不下去