對岩鋼用飛行系技能？ 作者可能連屬性相剋都沒弄清楚，特攻寶可夢主力技能大部分是物攻招，作者一定是雲玩家

感覺邏輯不太通順？？而且前一百章實力就衝超快才一下子就三隻都最終進化型了，美納斯就算了，另外兩隻一個月就進化兩次？？感情線也很牽強，很多人明明沒有多少互動就莫名的很有好感 才看到129就棄了orz

除了結尾潦草外還算可以，重點聚焦在人的身上，跟寶可夢的感情較為普通

I'm stop reading at chapter 20. I dont know why this novel liked by lot people but in my opinion this novel ita no different from other harem routine. The mc is already have death or live enemies since early story and even though he has golden finger he s